Now whether I'm poetry worthy or not is another question entirely...But in any case, the following is my own humble attempt to capture the emotions of that moment.
The Battle
My way is clear,
yet held by an unknown force I remain
pacing in agitation,
uncertainty? no.
This is fear.
Fear unjustified,
I make the leap and grasp the edge,
but only in my mind's eye,
it is enough.
My resolve solidified.
A battle within,
a culmination of emotion,
my heart screams for relief,
I know will come,
but only if I take the leap.
My heart beats fast,
yet within my mind a door closes,
the battle dies down,
I am one.
Alone at last...
No time left,
the ground falls away beneath,
yet all is right.
In midair, freedom,
flight beyond regret.
fear and gravity overcome,
my fingers grip the ledge,
peace at last,
the struggle over,
another battle won.

7 comments:
I wrote a poem too in class about a month ago
i may just post it! yours is good
Where have all the bloggers gone, long time passing?
When will they ever learn?
BOO!!! BOOOOOOO!!!!
Boo to you. Rubbish, filth, muck, slime, BLOG BLOG BLOG!!!
Publish worthy .........really. It is very good.
Blog already haha
Like the poem.........alot.
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